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Bluorange 2008-04-16 ch 4,	abusewhat! no!! damn sneezes... I have another story about sneezes, but now is not the time. I still love Wayne, even if he wasn't in this chapter much. And by the way, you are doing really good with your story, it has more than twice as many reviews as mine, even though I have eight chapters ): I would draw some fan art, but I am definitely lacking in the artistic department, I can't even draw stick figures that well, their heads always come out like eggs. Anyway I like the story so far, Keep writing please ^-^! ~Peace~
Bluorange 2008-04-16 ch 3,	abuseAW... me loves! It's hilarious when Eddie goes off on little tangents, which kinda reminds me of this one kid at summer camp a few years ago who was like knocked out with a tether ball because he was daydreaming. Gale Harold, I choose you! ~Make love not war~ Oh yeah, and I love Wayne. At least he's a nice person... Diego(cough cough)! (oh yeah thats right I'm talking to you, BRADLEY. I know you can hear me pounds on laptop)
cescy 2008-04-08 ch 4,	abusewow - this is really quality stream-of-consciousness stuff. i'm so hoping dorian and eddie get together - like dorian seems so genuine. and i'm sorry - jake is too cool. i'm seriously addicted :D thank you
SharkieBite 2008-04-02 ch 4,	abuseAwweh! What a cute story. ^^ I think I almost squealed at the end of this chapter. This probably isn't one of your most original reviews (and if it is, you must be terribly bored reading them all) but I just wanted to let you know you've got a new fan!
luminouscarte 2008-04-01 ch 4, anon.	abuseAw! Eddie Spaghetti is so cute and innocent! I can't wait for the next update, hopefully soon!
Naomi Schemer 2008-03-26 ch 4, anon.	abuseI have no idea why I called Eddie Gabe, for the record. Must have been a momentary lapse...loss of concentration...something like that.
Naomi Schemer 2008-03-26 ch 4,	abuseAww. Yes, I support Dorian/Gabe, maybe because Dorian is safe...but I like Gabriel. I don't want him to get hurt, and honestly? I'm with his brother. I don't like Bradley. I've already ranted about him and I could easily rant more. On the other hand, I'm happy to see Gabe has a healthy group of friends. I repeat my hope that he gets a happy ending.
andrea 2008-03-25 ch 4, anon.	abuseand eddie sneezed. he's just too adorable and honest and he thinks alot. what's ur with bradley tho? he can't seem to just be a nice guy. dorian can walk me home any day tho. eddie didn't ramble as much, and i missed it but this was still within character. i'm glad eddie's made some friends
Fictatiousrambler 2008-03-24 ch 4,	abuseAh! I'm loving this story, the almost kiss was so adorable! I can't wait for the next piece of the story.
Blazequeen 2008-03-22 ch 4,	abuseI love! I think I want to be Eddie! Oh, wait, kind of already am, darn it. Hope you are frequently nipped by the muses on this one! ^_^. Very interesting looking plot so far.
Amindaya 2008-03-20 ch 4,	abuseWell at least he jerked his head away first! It would have been even more awkward if he sneezed ON him. :D That was adorable, though. His first kiss was interrupted by his nose. I loved the magazine with the knitting biker. And that Ed and Dorian chose and I Spy book. It's pretty weird that their mother pats them on the head. Like dogs. That would be more condescending that affectionate, in my opinion. Is she that kind of person? I HATE Bradley officially. Nothing can redeem him now. He's a coward--because his own parents are gay, so he insulted them too. Just to look witty in front of those jerks.
MacKitty 2008-03-20 ch 4,	abusei love wayne! he's so cool. oh, and so is dorian. i'm actually reading The Picture of Dorian Grey and i thought...cool. (nah, there was no point to that) brad is interesting, but i don't like him as much as wayne or dorian or eddie or jake. maybe once more is revealed about him. and gary...bah. don't like him at all. but then again, he could have a reason for being the way he is. which would make the way he acts more understandable, but i still wouldn't like it. and eddie's mother pisses me off. :P that face pretty much expresses my thoughts on his mother. looking forward to the next installment! and i'd draw something for the contest but i...can't draw. sob. always wanted to though...so i went into writing instead. shrugs see ya!
cobecat 2008-03-20 ch 4,	abuseThis is one of the sweetest, most endearing stories I have ever read, all due to the voice it is written in. I seriously cannot express how admiring I am of the job you've done with this first-person persepctive. Edward is a wonderful character, with a distinctive way of looking at things that manages to be original and interesting without obstructing the flow of the narrative at all. The rest of the characters are equally intruiging, especially when seen through his perspective. Basically, this story is awesome and I cannot wait to read more.
Catseye*Rose 2008-03-19 ch 4,	abuseBradley and Eddie are so cute together! But Bradley is a jerk. Blurgh. Still...I'm sure he has some good in him! But I like Dorian better. Gary's an even bigger jerk, though. He deserves a smack XP Aw, Jake is such a good brother! Hopefully he can keep Eddie from getting hurt...but somehow I doubt it. Eddie would probably just angry if Jake tried to interfere...and then Eddie would do something rash...and it would end badly. So Dorian's little brother goes there, eh? That should become interesting! It's a brother connection! XD Ha, that almost-kiss was adorable...sneezing! XD
Casey.Duh 2008-03-19 ch 4,	abuseI love him. He is just so usefully useless. I lovelove him. I would do that drawing thing but I suck at drawing... I make a mean stick figure though. I mean really, I freaking rock at stick figures.

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