 Isilthrar 2008-07-10 . chapter 1(sighs) So very sad, but then I do love it dearly. In some ways, it reminds me of a character of my own called Daniel Harper- he's abused by his father, and one of meh oneshots is about his rather unusual coping method.
I did like Abigail's actions, and I'm impressed that you managed to get across a full character without any speech whatsoever. xD- and the little reference to Alice and the Mad Hatter and such was nice. I've seen a lot of premises where 'Alice' is actually crazy in an asylum. Did you intend to make a tiny hint to Amy being insane there?
Oh yes, and will there be any more of this? I just noticed that it cuts off shorter than the actual end of the play that you specified. (shrug) Well, if there is more, I shall look forwrad to it. If not, I enjoyed it very much anyway.
Peace Out
Isilthrar |
 Andrea Lotte 2008-02-07 . chapter 1Love the story, it's fascinating, but I think it needs to have a bit more depth and exploration...though I can't say much because you haven't included the whole play. But anyway, nice work! :-) |
 bod 2008-02-06 . chapter 1 I liked the primise of the story it is written quite poetically and you get a good idea of the childs state of mind in how it would be affected by what has happened to her. |
 starauthor23 2008-02-04 . chapter 1This was a very well-crafted and intense scene. I'd like to see the rest of the play. I was surprised by the crazy, bipolar personality of Amy, and Abigail's beheading was very creative. Very good. |
 Jon Emery 2008-01-31 . chapter 1This is so dark, but I absolutely loved your premise - a dreary attic transformed into a "sumptuous" tower. The way Amy dreams away her troubles is a good start, but you kept it up by having her see the mattress as a four poster, a stain as a tapestry, and her abuser as an evil Wizard. Bravo. |
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