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xLittleBlackConverse. 2008-04-17 ch 1,	i think you should totally continue with this. I love stories like this.
candlekitty 2008-03-30 ch 1,	Well, I'm telling you this is way too good to be left hanging as a one-shot.
Blithe smilE 2008-03-17 ch 1,	Please, please, please, please continue...i love it...:D Blithe smilE
Katie Saychiadu 2008-02-21 ch 1,	Hi Ajanae! Okay, so I think you should go on! It's a very interesting first chapter and I would like to know more about this best friend than just how he looks physically. Please update :) Katie
Where'djagoIndigo 2008-02-01 ch 1,	Oh. This is cool. Hm. Maybe you should put how/when she found out she liked him in here. That might have been your idea anyway, but I just thought I should voice it. Anywho, keep on writing!
XxAmberRomancexX 2008-01-31 ch 1,	Whichever you want. It'd be interesting to see it as a full-fledged story, but you'll have to make sure to have a plan for it. Otherwise, it'll just stay a oneshot. Either way though, its still pretty good. The guy is a jerk. :( And I admire Haley for just coming out and saying it like that. Most girls would just suffer silently. ahemmeahemahem
Preethy 2008-01-31 ch 1,	i think you should continue it it doesn't even need to be too long just make it different and not the way everybody expects it to end if you leave it like this it's good too great job though =)
S. Cherise 2008-01-31 ch 1,	You should continue it, or at least add to this. Every issue presented in the story is left unresolved. It's a nice start to a story but on its own it's pretty vague and has no conclusion.
SecondHandSonata 2008-01-31 ch 1,	Well. It's very incomplete. I'd go on, if I were you. The question is how would you do it. What would be the rest of your plot? Also, I'm not sure how the cousin in Iowa ties into everything? Apparently it was her fault, but it's kind of unclear how. Anyways, I hope you go on! Love, Salvation ala mode.
Shadowe Goddess 2008-01-31 ch 1,	CONTINUE!
Kaskade 2008-01-31 ch 1,	this is a really great story what u shood do is continue it. theres a lot of possibilities in wat cood happen next. for instance her coming back like a year later a whole new person. continue plz. this is good. i'll be w8ing 4 an update:)
mandybeth 2008-01-31 ch 1,	Please, please, PLEASE continue with this story. JUST SAY NO TO ONE-SHOTS! Just kidding, of course. But seriously, I'm a HUGE sucker for romance stories involving best friends, and there is just SO much you could do with a story like this. And besides, this is WAY too short to be a one-shot! It needs more! I mean, her best friend, unless I missed it, doesn't even have a name! HE NEEDS TO HAVE A NAME! And you NEED to continue with this story, or I will explode. Seriously. And honestly, could you live with yourself if that happened? I'm going to place this story on my alerts, in hopes that one day I receive an e-mail telling me that you've updated. But even if you keep this as a one-shot, I still enjoyed reading it.
Nocturnal silhouette 2008-01-31 ch 1,	Great story-you have me interested. But I have to say that it does feel unfinished at the moment. I think you have a great plot for a story, should you decide to continue it.
LondonLi 2008-01-31 ch 1,	I definitely think you should continue it. It's like a great teaser, but not quite enough for a one-shot.
dOrKy-GuRl03 2008-01-31 ch 1,	hey you should continue..its a very good one shot..but it would be nice if you turn it into a story..i feel so bad for her...i like it...bye..bye...

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