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| ValuedOpinion 2008-09-10 ch 13,  | abuseHey! so, since you're finished school now and all, does this mean that you'll continue writing your story?? I really hope so, because I was enjoying it. :D |
| xXRemXx 2008-04-27 ch 13, | abuseIts fine, don't worry about it =D I understand your situation. I almost NEVER update my stories nowadays since my life is so busy all the time Dx But update when you can =) |
| xxBreakingGlassxx 2008-04-11 ch 12, | abuseyay :D PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! i really need to know what happens :DD |
| kamicoh 2008-04-07 ch 12, anon. | abuseas per usual, i love this story.. hm... update soon... |
| -Rock 'n' Rose Bubbles- 2008-04-05 ch 12, | abuseaww cute chapter :) i wish all guys could be as sweet and understanding as dane... please update soon |
| adge24 2008-04-05 ch 12, | abuseAwesome chapter! Keep up the great work, and please try to update again soon! I can't wait to see what will happen next! |
| Rachetto 2008-04-05 ch 12, | abusehii! sorry i haven't been reviewing.. been tres lazy lately.. But Dane is soo sweet! I want a boyfriend like him! update soon. x |
| xXRemXx 2008-04-05 ch 12, | abuseHey! Here's your review. Sorry I dont review more, but I'm busy a lot. But you got me on a Saturday =P I'm still reading ^_^ |
| adge24 2008-03-27 ch 11, | abuseAwesome chapter! Keep up the great work, and please try to update again soon! I can't wait to see what will happen next! |
| kamicoh 2008-03-26 ch 11, anon. | abusethis is so sad..=o( hm...i hope you don't boot jack out of the story..but i hope jack doesn't hit it off with milly either..ehehehe..=o) please update soon..=o) |
| -Rock 'n' Rose Bubbles- 2008-03-24 ch 11, | abuseaww bless em :( that is sad. please update again soon |
| kamicoh 2008-03-23 ch 10, anon. | abuseHm...that was a short chapter! lol..=o) but, i still love your story..haha..=o) update soon, pretty pretty please.=o) u got some typos and u mixed up d use of 1st and 3rd person in the 1st part of the chapter..but so far, it's still all good.=o) i love dane..haha..=o) update soon!!=o) |
| -Rock 'n' Rose Bubbles- 2008-03-19 ch 10, | abusecute ;) update again soon |
| LostinLov3 2008-03-19 ch 10, | abuseaw, too cute some sisterly love... um, my only question is why you put the bolded words about messing up at the beginning. i understand that ur foreshadowing that something is going to go wrong bwteen milly and dane, but maybe put that part on the actual chapter where it happens because i make the reader expect to find out what goes wrong. well...update soon, cant wait for lemons... |
| adge24 2008-03-19 ch 10, | abuseAwesome chapter! I loved it a lot. Keep up the awesome work, and please try to update again soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! |