oh that was creepy. aw poor doggie and victora and her family. this was a great story hope you get an A on it.

I'm sorry to say first off, this story is hamstringed by its spelling problems. I'd recommend a spellcheck or something dear, because everytime I read a sentence that was nicely put together, it'd end with "Please don't kill med!" or "I swear I didn't kno!" Things like that can make people stop taking your work seriously after a paragraph or two. Other than that, I like it, the old summoning bit with an added twist. Keep polishing your style, and don't stop writing.

Cheers