Reviews for Girl Laying at the Dock

water lorelei 2008-02-08 ch 1,	abusePoor girl... sometimes doesn't flow very well, or is worded weirdly... yes, weirdly... but the idea is heartbreaking... you can see them standing at the dock, and then him going away, maybe forever... Yay... -Rachel
Blissfully Sarcastic 2008-01-31 ch 1,	abuseWhoa, this is a change for you. I've never seen you write this straightforward before this... And, I have to say, I don't much like it. Quite boring. I loved the last lines though. "In the agony his leaving causes He drifts away calling her name She never stops hearing his voice" That part was amazing, but that's about all I can say about this poem. Sorry, love.