Hahah, Mykel's obsession with the ball is cute.

"He grimaced, managed a low laugh. “Don’t. Who’s going to know?” He tugged on his pant leg, and he tumbled down with a soft, breathless yelp, startled eyes like a lost puppy, limbs tangling, noses touching, all warmth and fast heartbeats. “There’s no one here to know…” He lowered his voice. “Please. Just one night.”"

I lost the action a bit in this paragraph, I had to reread it to tell who was doing/saying what. But other than that it was good.

You can probably tell I'm not very good at reviewing...

+Andy

Aw... What a cute little one-shot. I LOVE it. They're so cute. Great job.

Cute. I liked the palpable awkwardness between them. :) cute little story.



Cool names too.

xo