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| Faith Adeline 2008-02-04 ch 2, | abusegreat job! one thing, you changed from you to him, and that threw me off for a second. I was like, wait say what? but yeah, that's all. I loved the concept of it though. So, great chapter! Faith Update soon! |
| Faith Adeline 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abusei like where this is going. very good start. i love the imagery, and the words you use really fit great with the story. keep it up :) Faith |
| caralita 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abusei love this, so much. the way you depicted this whole affair is just brilliant; you captured all the emotions so well. good job. |