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Faith Adeline
2008-02-04
ch 2,
abusegreat job! one thing, you changed from you to him, and that threw me off for a second. I was like, wait say what? but yeah, that's all. I loved the concept of it though. So, great chapter!
Faith
Update soon!
Faith Adeline
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abusei like where this is going. very good start. i love the imagery, and the words you use really fit great with the story. keep it up :)
Faith
caralita
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abusei love this, so much. the way you depicted this whole affair is just brilliant; you captured all the emotions so well. good job.
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