Reviews for Why It Can't Stay Good

Lurid Black 2008-04-23 ch 1,	abuse=] Sweet rhyming, and well thought up words that lead up to them. I also like the use of questions in the poem, which usually makes poems unique, like this one.
water lorelei 2008-02-08 ch 1,	abuseReally, really nice. There wasn't one verse that I didn't absolutely love. Oh, why can it never be the same that it used to be? So much truth in this. Beautifully put, especially the last part- line 21 and on. Bravo! -Rachel xoxoxoxo
Kid In Converse 2008-02-06 ch 1,	abuseI really liked the last several lines. You had a really curious (not bad!) way of putting things "And sometimes the truth, is what will bring us back, to our youth". So very true and I don't think that it could have been put any better. You're good with not over- rhyming and I'm a bit jealous of that XD Really good job!
Princess-anna57 2008-01-31 ch 1,	abuseThis is great! Well written. :) The last stanza is especially excellent. Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^