Excellent character work, though as yet the prince is somewhat one-dimensional. I assume any plans for later chapters would flesh him out, as good as you are at dialog.

Interresting and very discriptive.

Hm... an interesting choice of setting, I thought, but you chose well. I thought the conversation was believable and the situations were lifelike... but I have just one problem--

is "cleverfully" a word?

Well written, but very short. You seem to be back on track with your time period though.

It is well written, but confusing. They didn't have medical professionals or stocks in ancient India.