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| Heatless Flame 2008-02-03 ch 1,  | abuseI'm assuming this was not supposed to be the first chapter, because it merely gave background info and descriptions. Useful and rather interesting, but some action would not go amiss. Judging by the characters, I won't have to wait long. Be back to see this in a while, and could you review my story, Blade of Baikon? Thanks. |