Once again: Haha. It's only me. *laughs*

Once again: I am extremely excited for more. MORE! NOW! lol.

I have some bad news though: No spelling mistakes for me to bother you with. Well, that's actually good news, so whatever.

I really like how she got sidetracked thinking about John. It seemed really natural, the way she shifted topics like that. Or maybe its just me...

Anyway, great job! Again!

Haha. Bet you thought it was someone other than me. :P

So, just to tick you off, I think I'll start with the only spelling mistake I spotted: Peer not pier. lol.

One other thing I noticed: When you ranted about wiccans not being devil worshippers, you lost a little bit of the character. It became more your opinion and insulting the ignorant people and less a story.

In other news, VERY GOOD!! I already can't wait for more, and its really really really interesting. Are they all going to come up with totally different worlds? Or are they going to kinda create a joint world? I think it would be cooler if they all did totally different worlds. *is totally excited for next chapter* Man, this sounds hecka cool.

*SQUEE* for a character having a name. lulz at said charater being a dancer. lol.