Really great beginning to the story. I'm intrigued :) Can't wait for more!

~Carm~

hmm it is getting interesting. i hope u update soon.

hmm very good start to it..i can wait to see what it turns into..

That's really good so far! I read your whole profile, and I think you might have famous-writer potential. :D It was a little confusing in the beginning of chapter two when he is hearing those sounds, but other than that, I found it a very good story!

Classic, Unique names you came up with. Though still again, another great-to-read chapter. I sure hope you do. I'll keep my eye on you.

A very detailed chapter. Nice and congratulations. You're the first one I haven't made a flame at. Update on your time to come 'my lord'.

i like it update soon