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| The Prettiest Banana 2008-02-16 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this piece; the narrator's anger really shows through. My favourite line is this - I asked for respect You asked for a ** - Not sure why. I just like it. It has great flow, though I feel that it got a little sloppier towards the end. It's still a beautiful piece though. Nice work. |
| Lurid Black 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseShweet! And also sad, 'my patience worn thin' great work, incredable |