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| readyforpeace 2008-02-18 ch 1,  | abuseThis has nice metephors. I like the idea of missing a lack of memories. I can relate to that sometimes. I also like "walking island amongst walking islands" That is so true. I wish that people would reach out to eachother a little more so there would be less "islands" and more support. Anyway, nice job! :) |