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Reviews For: The Heart of Everything

Scottish Princess
2008-03-20
ch 3,
abuseWow. Dani. That's awesome! So sad, but such a great story so far! Keep up the awesome good work, I can't wait to read more.

~Anna
Lee's ghost re-born
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseAww sad! Is the by chance the same Coop as WH?
DemonBunny205
2008-03-02
ch 3,
abuseMy God... 0.0

Thats the best piece of writing I've read in a long time. Brilliant!!
Kioasakka
2008-02-17
ch 3,
abuseDon't they usually have the wake AFTER the funeral? But whatever, I dunno how the process works. I bet that Rachel's face is on the MISSING posters. And ugh Coop, it's not your fault!

Update REALLY soon! 'Kay??
~Kioasakka
Kioasakka
2008-02-17
ch 2,
abuseWhoa, okay, Rachel's really cool. Weird, but cool. Is she albino or something? Or does she just hate the sun? You've managed once again to successfully draw me into one of your stories. I totally envy your talent.

~Kioasakka
Kioasakka
2008-02-17
ch 1,
abuseAww, that's so sad D:
Coop is an interesting name, but I'd expect nothing less than interesting names from you :3

Ugh, I hope he doesn't go all emo like "oh it's my fault" on us...

~Kioasakka
The Ferrett
2008-02-04
ch 2,
abuseI love the dream, just love it. Problems? The rediculously large explanation of her clothing. I do enjoy the book vs chores vs outside moment but hey.
The Ferrett
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abuseDamn, lady. You certainly know how to do depressing in an opening chapter. How the rest of this tale isn't as dark as this. Clinically executed, spiffingly done. 10/10. I especially love the cop talk. Good dialogue.
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