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| Scottish Princess 2008-03-20 ch 3,  | abuseWow. Dani. That's awesome! So sad, but such a great story so far! Keep up the awesome good work, I can't wait to read more. ~Anna |
| Lee's ghost re-born 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseAww sad! Is the by chance the same Coop as WH? |
| DemonBunny205 2008-03-02 ch 3, | abuseMy God... 0.0 Thats the best piece of writing I've read in a long time. Brilliant!! |
| Kioasakka 2008-02-17 ch 3, | abuseDon't they usually have the wake AFTER the funeral? But whatever, I dunno how the process works. I bet that Rachel's face is on the MISSING posters. And ugh Coop, it's not your fault! Update REALLY soon! 'Kay?? ~Kioasakka |
| Kioasakka 2008-02-17 ch 2, | abuseWhoa, okay, Rachel's really cool. Weird, but cool. Is she albino or something? Or does she just hate the sun? You've managed once again to successfully draw me into one of your stories. I totally envy your talent. ~Kioasakka |
| Kioasakka 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseAww, that's so sad D: Coop is an interesting name, but I'd expect nothing less than interesting names from you :3 Ugh, I hope he doesn't go all emo like "oh it's my fault" on us... ~Kioasakka |
| The Ferrett 2008-02-04 ch 2, | abuseI love the dream, just love it. Problems? The rediculously large explanation of her clothing. I do enjoy the book vs chores vs outside moment but hey. |
| The Ferrett 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseDamn, lady. You certainly know how to do depressing in an opening chapter. How the rest of this tale isn't as dark as this. Clinically executed, spiffingly done. 10/10. I especially love the cop talk. Good dialogue. |