For most of the story, I thought he was a vampire.

That ending really did sum it up.

This was enjoyable and hilarious. I was expecting something completely different, but I was not disapointed in the slightest. Well done

-Dixxy

That made me smile! I definitely wasn't expecting that!

I hope you don't mind, I'm planning to read all your work now that I finished UYLM!

Its making me think of Red Ridig Hood- obviously a modern version of course!

:D! One thing's for sure, the ending was definitely not what I expected from the beginning. Made me chuckle. Looking forward to your future works!

Gah! That was a really great piece of writing. Really simple, but effective. Made me laugh :] Everyone needs to get their minds out of the gutter ay. Haha.

That was really good!

I also thought he was deflowering her. The story was really good though. Kepp writing!

ACK! I cannot believe this! Alright, so I'm definately in love with you. I love this story, it has a perfect ending. I just love how well you pulled this off. Keep posting!

Haha this made me laugh..deffinately wasn't expecting a splinter.

Hmm, I thought he was deflowering her at the beginning. Good write though :)

The synopsis made me think of Hansel and Gretel but it plays out like a bad joke. Still, I liked it ;)