First chap is quite interesting. Not sure I like the chatty narrative tone but I'll keep going. I'm quite surprised the doctors gave Cass no choice about becoming a male or female. Still, I suppose the plot wouldn't work if she wasn't forced to be a guy, right?

I do kinda wonder why you put a warning that the story contains intersexuality in the summary though. Usually people stick stuff like rape and abuse there because those kind of issues affect people who've gone through them. Or slash, because there are slash-lovers and slash-haters and it keeps everything organised. With intersexuality though, I don't think there should be a warning... It's as though you're putting it on the same kind of level as abuse stories that upset or disgust people. By putting a warning in, I feel like you're condoning people who predjuidice against intersexuals. This is just my instinctual feeling.

AWESOME. please continue?

this is an amazing story
and unlike most, it's actually been able to hold my attention for longer then the first 5 chapters.
please please continue this.
its magic.

Oddly enough, this story reminds me of the Harvest Moon game characters of the GBA SP...
LOL, what images I can create~!
I must say, I'm really liking this story.
Not at all, well, crap, quite the opposite. ^-^
... I probably sound like a 16 year old, or something...
Anyway, I hope ya can update as soon as possible, cus this is one of the best (and most confusing) stories I've read! (given, fan fiction dot net has limits, fiction press not so much)
^_^

~Shadow Rukario/Buruusu

tell me why i love this story, it's totally hillarious. the only problem is...can you please finish it i really want to know what happens, me and my sister both. please, please update. :( (tear drop)

- halliana

I really wanted Cass to end up with Shanye, even though im happy Shayne probably wont get left alone. Im just a little upset b/c this story has managed to suprise me and keep me on my toes and i was really hoping that when i got to the end i wouldn't be dissapointed, but truthfully i knew since Shayne first asked Cass out that she would Fall for Keegan and have to dump Shayne...i like to call it the "cliche love triangle" dont worry your not the only writer that has done this particular love trianlgle to my displeasure. lol


I feel like although Keegan has been there for Cass, Shayne has too even when Cass thought he didnt need anyone...i just hope u pull through in the end with some type of twist b/c from what i can see Keegan and Cass will realize their love for each other and Shyne will realize his for Aric, Cass will find out that she doesnt have AIDs and they will live happily ever after

I really love your story...i just wish u would have given me an ending that is as original and creative as your story

Just so u know i absolutley adore shane. I think he is different b/c he has been thorugh something traumatizing, so he shows his feelings differently then Keegan, Truthfully i hope Cass ends up with Shane

Go Aric! Man this story is getting tangled. If I get it right Aric loves Shanye who loves Keegan who might have a thing for Cass who doesn't know who he has a thing for anymore. Grandiose. I love it. Any hope of it ending in a foursome? :P

I absolutely love this story and I really hope you update soon.

I have to know what will happen to the boys. They don't have it easy but I hope Shanye and Aric can resolve their issues. Oh, and Cass & Keegan would make a pretty couple. They are almost like a couple already and I love the fact that Keegan doesn't mind that Cass is what he is. I have a feeling that they do love each other but they haven't realized it yet.

Anyway, absolutely love it and the story is very well written. It's easy to follow and very captivating. Keep up the good work

I really love the story and I can't wait until you update it...(if you still are) and i just reviewed to show that there are still reader's who appreciate your fiction

I know this review is for the first chapter, though this is a quick comment so I'm just saying that this story is really good I've read it all the way through (up to where you last udpated) and I'm hoping you update really soon so I could know what happens next and up to the ending of the story

I just read all the chapters so far, and this story is absolutely addicting! I really hope you update soon! I really can't wait to see what happens next in this story. Will Keegan and Cass ever end up together?!?!?! Seriously, it's driving me insane!

Wow! I've only read the first chapter and I want to hurl sharp things at you. Wikipedia Intersexuality, read the manga Intersexuality on Spectrum Nexus, and John Colapinto's 2001 book, "As Nature Made Him: The Boy Who Was Raised A Girl." Research, Research, Research!

ohh! Shayne got TOLD. Dang... that's brutal... this story is so... wow... I just hope everyone can get SOME semblance of a happy ending... until next time :)

I think I'll say this now:
This story is spectacularly original. It combines a lot of overused elements (girl is boys school) with a totally new twist. I dig it. And I'll continue to read. This is good.