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| ninjawitch93 2008-07-15 ch 1,  | abuseGreat poem! Your use of metephor was very nice and made it beautifuly (I need a new word, lol) detailed! You have terriffic insight on things and I love how you phrase everything. |
| dragonflydreamer 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseReview Game! This is a nice poem. I simply adore your metaphor of a fruit in this situation. It fits it so perfectly, but it's originality blows me away. Just one question: Is the narrator saying that Sara said this about her, or is Sara saying this about herself? I didn't quite get that. Maybe some quotation marks somewhere to clarify or something? Other than that, this poem is very wonderful. Great job! |
| Sexy vampirechick 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseHmm..interesting poem.It shows how the human mind stretches.Or maybe it's just me?Haha...anyways really nice. |
| t-t-t-ouch. 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuseEek. Wow. It kind of describes me. I like it. : ] |
| doxology 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Peace & Love ~>Hp |