Great poem! Your use of metephor was very nice and made it beautifuly (I need a new word, lol) detailed! You have terriffic insight on things and I love how you phrase everything.

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This is a nice poem. I simply adore your metaphor of a fruit in this situation. It fits it so perfectly, but it's originality blows me away. Just one question: Is the narrator saying that Sara said this about her, or is Sara saying this about herself? I didn't quite get that. Maybe some quotation marks somewhere to clarify or something? Other than that, this poem is very wonderful. Great job!

Hmm..interesting poem.It shows how the human mind stretches.Or maybe it's just me?Haha...anyways really nice.

Eek. Wow. It kind of describes me.


I like it. : ]

Beautiful.

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~>Hp