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| kelloggs256 2008-06-08 ch 1,  | abuseThis was like a song to me, especially the repetition at the end. The self-confirming of the last line, like the person I could see saying this was shaking her head to herself after a quick thought,'yeah, when it's all said and done, he'll still mean as much as he did then.' |
| doxology 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseAw, that sounds like a song. I love it. Peace & Love ~> Hp |
| a silenced revolution 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuseIt's sweet and nice in its simplicity. Nice. |