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Reviews For: Never Leave Me

V. Bao
2008-07-13
ch 1,
abuseIt's a simple piece but sends a very powerful message. Wonderfully written. It leaves the reader with strong emotions. Good job!
Toreanie
2008-06-11
ch 1,
abuseWell he is just a little liar. Anyways, good stuff!
Frail.Wings.Of.Vanity.
2008-06-10
ch 1,
abuseit...it...
pretty...
*left in daze*
I wish i could write poetry as well as you! im okay...but you seem amazing!
zutaraforever181
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseWell... that really sucks...
Er.. the subject matter! not the poem! The poem is amazing for a five liner!

Holy crap that's horrible...

ugh... that's horrible she sobs, then reads it over and over and over and over... and over
daughterofmusic
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abuseTragically; it's true, happened far too many times.
You've captured the feeling perfectly... it gave me the chills...
~Music
LivingMyLifeStory
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseaw...good poem...but it was very sad *tear*...even if it was 5 lines
Kiss.Today.Goodbye
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseand sometimes words are meaningless. I'm no good at reviews. But it was sweet, short and touching.
perpetual questions
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseFamiliar and a little cliché, but it flows well, and the simplicity seems to add some effect. Not bad.
Microsuede Mouse
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuse...? T^T -sniff-

Where is this stuff sprouting from? One of your muses is such an /emo/...
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