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| V. Bao 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseIt's a simple piece but sends a very powerful message. Wonderfully written. It leaves the reader with strong emotions. Good job! |
| Toreanie 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abuseWell he is just a little liar. Anyways, good stuff! |
| Frail.Wings.Of.Vanity. 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseit...it... pretty... *left in daze* I wish i could write poetry as well as you! im okay...but you seem amazing! |
| zutaraforever181 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseWell... that really sucks... Er.. the subject matter! not the poem! The poem is amazing for a five liner! Holy crap that's horrible... ugh... that's horrible she sobs, then reads it over and over and over and over... and over |
| daughterofmusic 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseTragically; it's true, happened far too many times. You've captured the feeling perfectly... it gave me the chills... ~Music |
| LivingMyLifeStory 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuseaw...good poem...but it was very sad *tear*...even if it was 5 lines |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuseand sometimes words are meaningless. I'm no good at reviews. But it was sweet, short and touching. |
| perpetual questions 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuseFamiliar and a little cliché, but it flows well, and the simplicity seems to add some effect. Not bad. |
| Microsuede Mouse 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuse...? T^T -sniff- Where is this stuff sprouting from? One of your muses is such an /emo/... |