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RodeoGirl 2008-08-14 . chapter 1
This was pretty good! A choose of what you chose to believe. In this line I think that you mean choice instead of choose.

A place you might so very well know as home- Heaven

I think that you should make Heaven a seperate line. I love spiritual poems! This was an awesome one. Especially the beginning!
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