Inevitable, but very cute nonetheless. A pleasure.

so adorable. I absolutely love it when gay guys get beat up and then their boyfriends act all hot and mother-hen-like. It's amazing. I love this story, it's so cute :)

I liked this one-shot! And I don't usually review (sorry to say...I'm not that great at it anyway), but I thought that in the a/n you said the flow sucked...well it seemed alright to me. Great writing and hope you continue!

X33 Aww, that was such a sweet read~ I liked it very much, and I thought it flowed along rather nicely ^^ Great job~

i remember i read this one and loved it but never did get a chance to review it..
so here i am reviewing this one of a hell cool story that i absolutely love because its nice, its cliche of a happy ending and it works!..

Oh, god. I love it, I absolutely love it. They way they are dancing around each other like telling I like you would shatter their relationship and how Michael is taking care of Kaedon, and how at the end he finds out that he’s Kaedon’s special somebody. It’s just wonderful.

Great oneshot. I really liked it and the slow development of their relationship. :)

Oh, wow. That was amazing! :D I actually started crying a few times during it, he he... 'cause I can sort of relate to it, he he. I'm gay, and I've had people so close that I've wanted so badly, but they've been with another person. =( I haven't been beaten up yet though, ha ha. Great job! :D

Just a few suggestions, though--do you proofread before you post? If you don't yet, you might consider starting. It was really, really good, but there were a few sentences that I had to go back and re-read a few times to realize there were a few confusing errors in 'em and such.

Anyways. Great job, again. =) I'm subscribing to you as an author now, he he.

nice-really nice

I LOVED this! It was so wonderful. Though, I'm far too tired to leave much of a review, sorry. Great work!

Oh my god. That was amazing. Its so much better than anythign I could write. Your really talented.

aw, this story makes me melt into a giant pool of putty.

You did a good job with a well known theme. I sort of knew where it was going but I loved the trip there.

That was really really nice! i like it how their gay especially... y friends realy get on my nerves when they say they don't like gays. but i think they are realy just great one of my other friends is a gay and he is kinda my best friend. WELL DONE