OMG i absolutly love this one! i could feel your words and the flow of how it all fit togetherand i loved it

this is pretty cool- i like it :D

^_^ I like this one. It also reminds me of the song "Who Knew."
"If someone said three years from now, you'd be long gone, I'd stand up and punch them out, cuz they're all wrong, I know better, 'cuz you said forever, and ever, who knew."
Also, one of my little friend circles, well, more like a friend square, there're four of us now, is fighting through a breakup right now, so I can really relate to this feeling.
And it's amazing how one breakup affected so many people in the end.
We all fought through different emotions, none of us really understood what the other was thinking, it was a mess.
I'm glad it's almost over. Lol

I love this poem.It's awesome!..I'm thinking of using it for one of my stories..that's if it's ok with you,of course.

the description is amazing...