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| Ash-Bash 2008-03-01 ch 4, anon. | abuseThat story was kind of cool...loved the ending! |
| Ash-Bash 2008-03-01 ch 3, anon. | abuseA fey never heard it... love the line "Most people tend to balk at interspecies relationships" |
| Ash-Bash 2008-03-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseUm it seemed kind of typical to me. The positive is that is was very straight forward and had a simple plot that made it easy to follow |
| Susan-Dreamer 2008-03-01 ch 15,  | abuseMechanics: Ranwen Originality: Myriad Best: Myriad |
| Monev11235 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseMechanics: Myriad Originality: Hendred5 Best: Myriad |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseMechanics: Myriad Originality: Hendred5 Best: Myriad It was very difficult to choose this month! There were so many! |
| Lenari Soto 2008-02-28 ch 15, | abuseLovely! I liked it very much! Alright, voting, even after you've made it SO HARD FOR ME TO VOTE BECAUSE YOU'RE ALL SO FABULOUS: Mechanics: Jane Ellecot Originality: Myriad Best: Motoko Great job, everyone! It's getting harder to vote every time (which admittedly adds to my, um, avoidance of it >.>) ~Lenari |
| Lenari Soto 2008-02-28 ch 14, | abuseSO MUCH LOVE. Just... amazing, Myriad. Amazing. You're making this so difficult for me! |
| Lenari Soto 2008-02-28 ch 13, | abuseHeart-wrenching, definitely. I feel like I'm sorry too. The only thing I'd fix is the formatting... some spacing would reduce the confusion and make it easier to read. Other than that, good job! |
| Lenari Soto 2008-02-28 ch 12, | abuseOther than the fact that I'm confused whether Maddy is a 'he' or a 'her,' there's absolutely nothing else I can say except great job. I liked it very much! |
| Lenari Soto 2008-02-28 ch 11, | abuseYou'd think I'd be eloquent, seeing as I'm an English major, but I lack the words to tell you how much I love this. Just... great job. I hope there more Sean and Alexei to read soon! |
| Lenari Soto 2008-02-28 ch 10, | abuseAbsolutely great! Very realistic and exciting... great job! |
| Lenari Soto 2008-02-28 ch 9, | abuseBeautiful. I liked that there was emotion even in the smallest things... the scene is just amazing in and of itself. Great job! |
| Lenari Soto 2008-02-28 ch 8, | abuseI love this SO MUCH. Not only is it amusing to no end, but it just seems like a really interesting concept. I'd love to know what happens next! Also, great job with mechanics. Very neat. |
| Lenari Soto 2008-02-28 ch 7, | abuseThe sensory imagery is very good, and the character is very intriguing. The mechanics were excellent, and my curiosity has been piqued. Great job! |