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| Mad for Figs 2008-02-19 ch 1,  | abuseThis is interesting. It almost sounds like a Stephen King novel. :P I like his writing, and this sounds very intriguing. Something about your first excerpt though seemed kind of repetitive. I guess with just the people running and feeling stranded? I feel like it was different words portraying the same meaning. But seriously. i like where this is going. I'd like to see updates for this because I know for a fact I'm gonna love it. :D Keep it up! I'm looking forward to reading it. |
| criti-sized 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseWow it seems like I'm the first to review your new story. It's been so long since I have had the chance to get on the computer that I don't know what to do, but I have to start somewhere. This was definitely interesting I must say. To see someone write about something-- Correction, nothing that has potential to kill is cool. I liked how you kept the descriptions of each diiferent character vague. Going into too much detail here would've ruined the effect that you were trying to have in the short. C.S. |