Reviews for Consigned To Oblivion

Reviews For: Consigned To Oblivion

Beauty From Pain 2008-04-10 ch 4,	abuseWow. That was amazing! I have those same dreams of finding a Prince Charming and having a storybook romance. So far, I haven't been that lucky though ^^; But I'll see for what the futue holds. Anyway, great song! Do you sing? These lyrics would make music beautiful. Keep writing songs, you've got tons of talent =]
Arn 2008-03-01 ch 12,	abuseOk, I feel foolish now O.O the song Consigned to Oblivion was not your last song, it seems >.< Now I more strongly suggest you rhyme, because your songs are somewhat uninteresting as it is read them (or at least put some effort into rhyming even one word). The two songs I really liked are Faded Memories, and After the Ink Dries. The rest, i thought were only OK.
Arn 2008-02-24 ch 6,	abuseHmm, your songs are interesting, and I can sense there's a rhythm behind them (and a story too). The only one I thought could need a little improvement was the fourth, jaded, i just couldn't connect with it very well, i do NOT want to be a princess, I'm not a girl. Other than that I thought your songs are unusual, that's a good thing, with original titles. I actually was kind of confused why you used thoughts in Swimming in Anonymity, questions actually distract the rhythm, but I think you want them there. I am guessing this last song pretty much wraps up your collection because the names match. Well I thought it was pretty good.
FoxyWriter 2008-02-13 ch 3,	abusejar? I can only assume that represents whatever pain she's going through...whatever she's done to herself. So sad. Wonderfully written though - paints the emotion effortlessly. ~FoxyWriter
FoxyWriter 2008-02-13 ch 2,	abuseagain, well written and expressive. Although it's a sad song, I love it.. I definitely wonder how it'd sound as a song (I can imagine it would be good xD) ~FoxyWriter
FoxyWriter 2008-02-13 ch 1,	abusewow...rather sad, but really good. Flows great and sounds like it could be a really good song. :D ~FoxyWriter
Arn 2008-02-12 ch 1,	abuseWow pretty good. I think there's an extra 'chorus' at the end. I dunno.

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