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notoriousreviewer
2008-05-09
ch 1,
abuseWell, yeah, she's right about the whole these first years preparing us for everything else, and that is the exact opposite of filling up every second with studying. This is the stage where we're having fun and discovering the world and being carefree. Crushing all that with studying and school and stress is just inhuman, EVEN if they don't realize they're doing it. Teenagers aren't flipping MADE for crap like this.
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2008-03-10
ch 1,
abuseI ** like this. One day i should just tell that to my parents face and they'll get whats coming to 'em. Anyway, Nice ... story or rant or whatever you can call this.
Rudolf Zen
2008-02-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow dude. That is really expressive. You do know that all moms are like that right? Well asian moms. They expect us to the straight A harvard mit students even if they were straight Cs when they were young. Just pretend not to listen to them and you will have a good life =D
Silence of the Shadows
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abuseI loove it! :D

I spotted typo/spelling errors though.

"Fell lucky that you have something to make excuses of about yur pathetic current status in life."

is it supposed to be "Feel lucky"?

"Do you wan a ** ROBOT for your son?"

is it "want a ** ROBOT"? :D otherwise it`s great.
Bazooka Joy
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abuseI can totally relate to this; very easy to see how angry and frustrated you are. Assuming that the person who reviewed before me is correct, I cannot wait to move out myself.
In the Rye
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseJust wait until you move out. Your relationship with your parents will improve drastically. Well, at least mine did...
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