I liked it :). I liked the way it was written, and the story line too.

Ending it with an autograph was pretty neat but I just loved the idea of the stolen plot.

Nice work ^^.

I liked this quite a bit. Plagiarism has got to be a hell of an embarrassing thing to cop to. I'm not expecting this piece to continue any further (it could, but I like the fact that a short story can open up so many avenues for the reader to explore in their imagination), but I'm kind of curious to know what's so ominous about the Miles family...

I really enjoyed this story. Again, very good balance between plot and reflection. You make the commonplace seem interesting without blowing it out of proportion with language.

My only complaint is the end. I feel like this is more of a clever cliffhanger than the actual end to the story. I'm not asking for four more chapters, just maybe a little more to clue me in on what kind of confrontation would occurr, especially since we get "all sorts of bizarre stories" but none of the stories. Yes, the family powerful but are the crazy? Vindictive? Eccentric?

But again,overall a great read,I'll definitely be back to read more from you!

Emily