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fleur de l'est 2008-08-29 . chapter 1
Though without a single word suggesting it, and perhaps exactly because it's not deliberated implied, this poem has a tint of sadness and despair. I liked your choice of vocab which is somewhat medieval.. Lips tasting salt - tears?

Vivid imagery, I had the scenes appearing in my head, in slow motion.

Feelings well expressed =)

~fleur
Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-08 . chapter 1
This is so bittersweet.

I love the fact that even though the narrator's love has found another, the narrator does not bear a grudge. He/she is even smiling to see that the person they love is happy with someone else, and that is very touching.
Quite different from the usual 'I hate you/you broke my heart' scenario.

Lovely.
Yellow Duvet 2008-02-02 . chapter 1
Aww, so sweet. Very simple but written in a way that makes it very fascinating. Great job. :D
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