 fleur de l'est 2008-08-29 . chapter 1Though without a single word suggesting it, and perhaps exactly because it's not deliberated implied, this poem has a tint of sadness and despair. I liked your choice of vocab which is somewhat medieval.. Lips tasting salt - tears?
Vivid imagery, I had the scenes appearing in my head, in slow motion.
Feelings well expressed =)
~fleur |
 Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-08 . chapter 1This is so bittersweet.
I love the fact that even though the narrator's love has found another, the narrator does not bear a grudge. He/she is even smiling to see that the person they love is happy with someone else, and that is very touching.
Quite different from the usual 'I hate you/you broke my heart' scenario.
Lovely. |