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| greenenvy16 2008-08-21 ch 16, | abuseOH, what a cliffy! Please update soon. Awesome story. |
| 0tomorrow0 2008-08-20 ch 16, | abuseargh stupid evil twin dude.. c'mon good alan rescue mindy before anything really bad happens! ..oh yeah, and i loved the interaction between .. uh, the main character (how could i have forgotten her name!?) .. and good alan. |
| lisax0 2008-08-19 ch 16, | abuseWow, Love it! |
| AMM3485 2008-08-18 ch 16, | abuseWell nice allan knows. But mean Allen is still in the dark. now Mind is with the lunatic Allen, can't wait for the next update. Awesome chapter! |
| Logic Escapes Me 2008-08-18 ch 1, | abuseI like where this is going...even if it is just the Prologue I've read so far. |
| KelseyBell910 2008-08-18 ch 16, | abuseExcelleent. Continue soon. |
| 0tomorrow0 2008-08-10 ch 15, | abuseyesyesyesyes an update! ^__^ and i really hope you reveal more about alan's evil twin guy, son. this trip they're going on is just perfect~ anything can happen~ *evil grin* |
| Forgottenunloved 2008-08-07 ch 15, | abusegreat chapter! only one question... WHEN THE HELL AM I GUNNA READ SOME EM AND ALAN ACTION!? ANYTHING!? hopefully soon right? :] UPDATE! this update was to long to wait for! >:| |
| Two Eyed Wandering Sheep Lo... 2008-08-07 ch 15, | abuseGreat chapter! And dont go backwards! Go on! We need more! |
| Whispered Darkness 2008-08-07 ch 15, | abuse...And the plot thickens. I really want to know the twin's name. R? that can stand for so many different possibilities... So which one exactly is the 'evil twin' Alan or R? And poor Luke. :shakes head: lol anyways another awesome chapter to this story. Can't wait for more ;P |
| AMM3485 2008-08-07 ch 15, | abuseI think that this chapter was totally awesome! I can't wait for the lodge weekend next chapter! |
| KelseyBell910 2008-08-07 ch 15, | abuseReally good. Continue soon. |
| Candiferous 2008-07-24 ch 8, | abusei can't stop reading it, even though there's been 8 chapters and only abstract conflict. baffling. p.s. she needs to be with luke D |
| Olivia Cook 2008-07-22 ch 14, | abuseWow, this is getting SO good. If I wasn't in love with this story before, I definitely am now. Oh, and for the question at the end of the last chapter, I definitely like Alan better (as I've sort of mentioned before), no matter how creepy and perverted he is. ;) PLEASE update soon! Olivia |
| pinkeclipse 2008-07-21 ch 14, | abusewhen is luke going to admitt his feelings? is alan in a cult of vampires? |