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| Candiferous 2008-07-24 ch 8,  | abusei can't stop reading it, even though there's been 8 chapters and only abstract conflict. baffling. p.s. she needs to be with luke D |
| Olivia Cook 2008-07-22 ch 14, | abuseWow, this is getting SO good. If I wasn't in love with this story before, I definitely am now. Oh, and for the question at the end of the last chapter, I definitely like Alan better (as I've sort of mentioned before), no matter how creepy and perverted he is. ;) PLEASE update soon! Olivia |
| pinkeclipse 2008-07-21 ch 14, | abusewhen is luke going to admitt his feelings? is alan in a cult of vampires? |
| AMM3485 2008-07-21 ch 14, | abuseThe blood and guts on her car were sorta eerie. But she's satrting to like Luke, interesante. |
| Whispered Darkness 2008-07-21 ch 14, | abusewow, I had gone away for two weeks and when I came back I found my inbox full of updates from you! Anyways awesome chapter(s). I can feel some tension building here eh? This should get interesting ;P Anyways can't wait for more. still lovin' the story, it's very intriguing. |
| Forgottenunloved 2008-07-20 ch 14, | abuseanother great chapter! but im DYING for some Alan and Charlatte (i know i keep spelling her name wrong, please forgive me :P ) action! like at least them have a good length conversation but i guess with the whole camping trip its soon to come, eh? just update soon! this is the most important/anticipated story on right now for me! :] lovelovelove |
| KelseyBell910 2008-07-20 ch 14, | abuseReally really good. Continue soon. |
| Forgottenunloved 2008-07-19 ch 13, | abusei like alan more i imagine him as joe jonas i see luke as peire froms simple plan :| love the story! update soon! im dying for when alan finds out charollete knows his secret! |
| teardrop456 2008-07-18 ch 13, | abuseluke is the best character wise :P |
| AMM3485 2008-07-18 ch 13, | abuseShe finally knows! Awesomeness! But anyways, I love Alan even hough he's weird, but I do admit that Luke isn't the douche that he was before. I can't wait for the next update. |
| Kar3b3ar 2008-07-17 ch 13, | abusei think luke is a great character, with all the heroic qualities to him that make him a good friend, while alan is just as wonderful too but in a more subtle way, i like them both equally, but i think alan has more layers to his character than luke so far. its obvious Luke likes Emmy, while alan to me is just very intrigued by her curiosity. good job! |
| atreyu love 2008-07-17 ch 3, | abusehaha. alan? lol |
| atreyu love 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseunwillingly. lol |
| KelseyBell910 2008-07-17 ch 13, | abuseThis is really good. Continue soon. I like Luke better. |
| inFEARandFAITH 2008-07-17 ch 13, | abusewell so far, we know more about luke and his personality and we know almost nothing about alan's, so by default i like luke's more because there's nothing really to compare to, you know? However, I'm more interested in Alan. And I'd definitely prefer is Em got together with Alan, not Luke. Luke's kind of boring in my opinion. |