 Chalk 2008-04-06 . chapter 1That was really nice...i could almost feel the frustration inside of me while reading it...at times you get sort of repetitive, so you might want to ease your pen at some points, but over while, it was good...you used the lyrics at very adequate parts, that wase excellent...most songfics usually don't fit in the lyrics write and there's this big mess, but this one was excellent..
i'm downloading the song now...
i wish you would continue with this...i really want to see Graham end up with the right person...and it sucks that Natasha is so nice, it makes it so much harder to hate her...:P |