I adore this poem! It reminds me of some of mine which are...gone someplace where people can't find them...

Hey! Great poem! I've missed FictionPress and I've been sorting all the new story alerts to a folder on my e-mail and i chose to come this one first...

I must say, with all the work I've been doing recently, it sounds like you're decribing my world with this piece. So much chaos and the moments of stillness only seem to welcome more unpredictable and horrible situations... but how you been?

I'm off to read 30 e-mails of new story alerts of which some are still yours so I'll be back... lol

well I pressed that pretty little button lol
really great poem. totally loved it. :)
my fav but woz the ending

now this poem has got me thinking
could this really happen?
really well done
^_^ keep up the gd work

Man, thats some poem!

*blinks*

I like your amazing word power. Seriously, finding that many synonyms, whoosh! and i like how you give the whole voice coming from background feeling. it was a bit too dark to take, but creative writing nonetheless. good going...