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| Dreamsx3 2008-10-12 ch 4,  | abuseCute story. I can't wait to read the rest of this! |
| Liviania 2008-09-26 ch 4, | abuseGreat story - I like the cast, and Mars's voice. Livi |
| Feel The Waltz 2008-09-26 ch 4, | abuseI'm really enjoying this :) |
| Zebbie 2008-09-24 ch 4, | abuseLovely quality writing. Really enjoying the flow of the story and this is a very unhelpful review. Sorry about that. Eagerly awaiting more chapters! |
| Roman Candles 2008-08-09 ch 4, | abuseAwesome chapter! Keep up the great work and update soon. |
| Cari Marie 2008-08-02 ch 3, | abuseThis is soo cute :3 I like how Gray isn't perfect. I've been getting tired of perfect stories with perfect characters. I also think it is a cute and unique idea. Update Soon! Cari Marie |
| Fork-In-Your-Eye 2008-07-17 ch 3, | abuseYour story made me laugh^^ It's a good story, I love it^^ YAY! Update soon^^Thanks with cherries on top. |
| Pundit 2008-07-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseSo... is Marshall outing his newly acquired boyfriend to the world in his memoirs? If so, you think he might want to ask him first or mention it in a more serious way (he sort of mentioned it after their first romp, but it was in passing and might've been taken as a joke). I'm guessing this might have something to do with the 'looking back, no wonder Gray was **' comment. I like the story very much though. I re-read the last chapter, and the Mars bar comment had me laughing my ** off. Thanks for posting! |
| iwishillwilluponyou 2008-07-01 ch 2, | abuseoh my god ...this story is ...ultimate cuteness X3 |
| allyoucaneater 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abuseWell... that was... interesting... in a sarcastic-ish witty-ish cute way... (yes that doesn't really make sense) |
| Pundit 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abuseI absolutely love this! It's so funny and cute and... *gushes* I have to admit, I was one of those lustful college girls in the gay seminar. HeeHee. Anyway, I've literally laughed out loud about six times already in two chapters (a record, I believe), so I am very much looking forward to your next installment. Thanks for posting! |
| Jessica Knorr 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abuseYey, I got to read this before it was published. ^_^ Marshall is so adorable. Wish I could write a fraction as well as you. *chu* Loves you. |
| Coracao Selvagem 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abuse..and adding to favorites. -click- and done. Loved it. I love how real the characters are. I adore Marshall! And the way he teases his agent is hilarious. I cannot wait to read your update. Splendid story, love. |
| Back of Beyond 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter, though I got slightly confused when 'Gabe' suddenly became 'Graham'. xD |
| Emily 2008-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think this is a great vignette :) |