sad but sweet. i liked how you compared monotomy and a highway, very interesting.

I know the feeling. Being trapped in monotony is so suffocating, isn't it? And it seems like everyone else knows where they're going ("those cars... [that] are anything but still") and you're just stuck in one place, not knowing where to go from there. At least, that's what I get out of this. I like it.

hmm i like this

i think in the last stansa i'm just instead of i am just sitting...would flow better with the poem..but that's just

my opinion. :]

I've always loved the sound of cars, and now I know why: "they are anything but still." Lovely work.

i need prayers very badly right now.

please, just ... pray for me. please.

i don't know what else to say. please. i need help.

i need your prayers. please. right now.

please.

xx

Great poem. I really liked it. Keep it up.

Faith

Very good.

but the rush of passing cars on the highway/outside my window are more than exhilarating... the rush... is more than

I like the subject of the piece a lot.. its really interesting and the way you described it you can see and hear it... beautifully done