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| pheer 2008-07-22 ch 1,  | abuseyou sound very happy :) |
| Aquafied 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abusei'm so happy for you nomsi. beautiful. |
| diffident 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseHaha okay so I was seriously JUST thinking--wow, Naomi really needs to post another poem--and I check my email and omg! There it is! Okay, so: This is gorgeous, and I love you, and you deserve this so much. I love how it begins, like all your suffering is worth this happiness, or that all the suffering was necessary in order to experience this happiness, or something ridiculous like that. But you portray it so well. And the metaphor of flying works really well here. Now get online, I have something to tell you. -me |
| smile for the sunshine 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abusei think it was beautiful. congrats on this. |