I liked it...please update!!
P.S. enjoyed your other brotherly love story!

l love it...update son

Interesting...your rewriting it which is no problem with me, but it was kinda confusing in the 1st chapt. I really liked Brotherly Love and I think if you touch up this chapt and write more it be great!! But you wrote it last year =[ so does that mean you wont continue on?

this is actually extremely much improved from the last draft..
i do hope you are going to continue this new draft of BL.. because the idea is good.. and you played it out well but i think it really has the ability to be AMAZING if you did a second draft of the whole story and made it as good a quality of writing as this chapter..

i liked this beginning a lot better than the last one.. its really good.. please continue!

I absolutely LOVED the story brotherly love.
And now That i read the first chapter of More then Brotherly Love,
I think i fell in Love all over again times 29294325075429685472436572026345764320765.2

Your Writing as GREATLY improved, and I am looking forward to the next chapter, and HOPING i won't have to wait TOO long.
This story is hard to stay away from =P

Much love, Alyson

Update

Yeah, you're right, it's making me twitch^^; It's REALLY confusing in the beginning...middle...end...I suggest you let me go over this and directly point everything out to you...if you decide to, e-mail me at I think I can really help.
So this is like an alternative to the original Brotherly Love, I take. Planning things out sucks^^; It holds onto and strangles your creative freedom ='(
I suggest(if you don't mind watching subtitled stuff or anime) watching Devil Beside You- it can be found on Veoh and YouTube. Have fun!

hey! I read brotherly love, and I really liked it, so i was excited when u posted a remake. So far, its good. i think I like this first chapter better than the one in brotherly love:). I can't wait to read more!

Hey, quite entertaining a few mistakes here and there. Update

yo, this story seemsreally interesting and I'm going to keep reading. One thing is though, the start was really confusing, because I had no idea what was going on. And definetly some of the parts were really hard to read over, and my eyes just skipped over them, trying to figure out what was happening. Keep writing

He's a jerk. lol but the Uno game was awesome. XD

hmm...interesting. so why are you writing a different version of brotherly love? i like the old one but i'm sure this'll be great too ~ Alenor.