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| xXCandyGirlXx 2008-05-20 ch 6,  | abuseNice, I like it. 8D Please continue, and one thing you left out is what year you're doing your story on for the story plot. I mean like when Ariel said, "it's way past 1983." Is it 2008 now you're talking about? Anyway, gambarre with the story. [8 |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-05-14 ch 8, | abuseno problem. take ur time. i know it's tough trying to write a story and update quick when school and everything is in the way...look who's talking. i'm writing a story and i'm supposed to be studying right now for tomorrow's exam. jeez. ok, update when you can! |
| Faith Adeline 2008-05-13 ch 8, | abuseI understand. Hopefully you're able to update soon. Faith |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-04-15 ch 7, | abuseHi! Good chapter. Seems kind of strange for them to get on so well all of a sudden. [maybe I missed something?] Anyways, update soon! |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-14 ch 7, | abusegood chapter. Although remember to keep the dilect in the right year for Shea. There are things and a certain way to their speech back then. I'm assuming...she's related to him, or to the person he loved. Just a guess. Keep it up and update soon :) Faith |
| lulu511 2008-04-14 ch 7, | abuseEh... I'm not so good at family trees either. Lol. |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-04-05 ch 6, | abuseHello yet again. ;) Yea I know what you mean when you say this story is on many ppl's alert/fav. list but they don't drop a review. I have a story which is facing a similar problem. Oh well, that's how it is. Anyways, interesting. things are about to get even more confusing.. |
| lulu511 2008-04-05 ch 6, | abuseAh! Who is this mysterious Shea Nelson? Great chappie, can't wait for another update! |
| xMy-Chemical-Writingx 2008-04-04 ch 6, | abuseYay, I got a mention! Wow, wouldn't that be freaky, having someone tell you you've been alive for seventy-odd years and you thought you'd only been alive seventeen? I would have a heart attack right then and there. Great chapter, update soon so I know what happens next! -xM~C~Wx |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-04 ch 6, | abuseI liked it. Evil cliffy haha. The diologue was a bit confusing, so it was hard keeping up with who was talking, but I enjoyed it. keep it up and update soon. Faith |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-04-03 ch 5, | abuseYou evil person! Why! Why a cliffie! AH! I sneaked online [the monthly test is around and i'm supposed to be studying] just to read this story and you gave me a cliff hanger? nO! Hahaha, alright update soon! I just cant wait to read furthur. |
| Pyra Sinclaire 2008-04-02 ch 4, | abuseAWESOME! Kepp it going! |
| xMy-Chemical-Writingx 2008-04-01 ch 5, | abuseI really like this. It's intriuguing that he's solid, yet still a ghost. I liked that he fell backwards, that was funny. Keep writing, can't wait to read more! -xM~C~Wx P.S. I wrote a review without a smiley! |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-01 ch 5, | abusegreat chapter, good length. Keep it up and update soon :) Faith |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-04-01 ch 4, | abuseHahaha, short and cute. hope you update soon. :) Love the way the story is planned out. |