Wonderful start. Update soon.

Ah, Fate! You have to love it!

Hi! I'm always glad to make someone's day.

Firstly, when you wrote excepting, I think you meant accepting. It's in the 3rd or 4th paragraph.

Other than that you did a great job. I like Hunter and his pretty blue eyes. And horay for Vince getting drunk. Drunk people do funny stuff...

Good start!

Oh, this is interesting. I don't know much about dog races or Michigan, so it's nice to read about new things. Plus, Victor sounds like a sweetie.