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| kloun mannequin 2008-03-31 ch 1,  | abusesounds sad, people can feel loneliness even if they're with friends.. |
| i.am.pockets 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abusei know what you mean about the random italizing and bolding. i do it in some of my poems. i like the last line the best... nothing but little whispers... it's beautifully sad. |
| felicia13 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseI think the bold/italics add character, too. Don't worry, I won't burst your bubble... today. *vaguely threatening* I liked the poem itself. It was very cynical. Cheers on using the tanka. Personally, I find 17 or 31 syllables hell to work within. Thus, I have great respect for people who can do them well. I forgot, while I was reading it, that this wasn't just free verse. Thanks for being a poet. Felicia. |
| Basara 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseas the eye of a pessimists... which one's living is always composed of conspiracies and conflict... that would put one's thought in it... nice... |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseyour a/n was interesting... i like the italicizing, but the bolding is a bit distracting... it makes me look more at the letters than the word... But aside from that I really liked the piece.. I can relate... I love the ending especially.. great piece |
| RaindropsOnBlackRoses 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseI can definitely relate to that one! I love how you bold and italicize and put things in parenthesis! |