Reviews for The Stereotypes Are Suicide

Reviews For: The Stereotypes Are Suicide

Twist Their Emotions 2008-08-09 ch 12,	abuseI find these letters extremely interesting. You use tons of great phrases that are so witty. I am interested on how this is going to go. Will you continue writing simply letters until your character is satisfied? Or will she act and completely change direction.
ImaginaryGirlChild 2008-08-09 ch 12,	abuseHonestly I never know what to do with this story. I've been following it for a little while and I love the fact that not everything is spelled out for the reader it's a little confusing with so many people being mentioned. All in all it's a very good story.
Twist Their Emotions 2008-06-13 ch 11,	abuseInteresting.
Coach Hermy 2008-06-02 ch 8,	abusePuffy, I am so proud to have had the honor to teach you and our other 'mutual club friends'. Your thoughts and words meant so much to me and help me validate in my own mind the importance of the times we spent together learning from each other. Your accomplishments then and now will continue to highlight the talents and efforts you put into your work. Thank you so much for keeping this old coach in your heart and mind. You are a part of one of the most cherished times of my teaching career and I thank you for it. Santa
Coach Hermy 2008-06-02 ch 8, anon.	abuseThank you so much for the kind words and thoughts. I have been blessed to have had the opportunity to know such wonderful students as you and other members of our 'club' have been. Your accomplishments then and now (especially your writing) are just the tip of the iceberg on what you can accomplish and I feel honored to have been allowed to play a part of that. Keep it up. I can't wait for the next chapter. Always my best wishes for you and our "mutual friends". Santa
stick 2008-05-28 ch 7,	abuseI read all your new chapters and loved them of course, but I wanted to comment on this one because it stuck out to me a lot. And I'm amazed that you said you were nervous about it because it was unbelievable. You have this amazing gift for that powerful bluntness that wordy kids like me would kill to obtain. You astonish me.
stick 2008-05-11 ch 6,	abuseIt's so good. It really is. I think my favorite parts are the closing lines. "Nerves, nausea and narcotics", so forth. I liked the whole, letter to self deal. We got to see more of London. I was confused about her, but now it all makes sense. Writing a letter to yourself is really a poetic sort of thing anyway. You did it well, with this character. Who may be you, but it doesn't matter because I like her anyway. Amazing. Yes.
lanna 2008-05-10 ch 6, anon.	abuseI can't help but wonder, would London happen to be you?
lanna 2008-05-10 ch 5, anon.	abuseOkay, so, I started reading your story not sure what I should expect. As I read, I guess I start to see the inner thoughts of a troubled, somewhat sarcastic yet smart teenage girl. Yet I know barely anything about her, so I keep reading, slightly confused. Until I get to this chapter, when things start to explain themselves. I'm starting to really like this story. And of course when I find this line "And what is more, you are probably wondering how I managed to discover your restored affection so early as I did, because it seems that you really do think that I would not recognize a crush if it were spelled out for me on a paddle whacking my face. Repeatedly, in capital letters, and in slow motion" I can't stop reading. I laugh for about five minutes, because, well, yeah, I'm like that. Good job, love the writing style and the break from all those cliche romances out there.
R. Mushroom 2008-04-25 ch 1,	abusethis is interesting. i like it :)
stick 2008-04-24 ch 4,	abuseI read all of it. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I got the sense that there is supposed to be a lack of mystery and purpose. That's the point. The other reviewers complained, but I think you were doing it on purpose. I love it. Either I'm the only one who gets it, or I'm completely over-estimating you. I like this, because it's unique. There's not really a plot, just a lot of outpouring of feelings in a sort of creepy, but poetic way. London, she scares the ** out of me. She seems nuts. I don't know why, and I hope this is what you intended, but that's the interpretation I got. It's refreshing from the "jock boy meets outcast girl and they fall in love" / "girl's life is terrible and she cuts herself but falls in love and EVERYTHING IS PEACHY". It doesn't seem perfect, if anything it seems a little dysfunctional. I am dysfunctional, I love dysfunctional, I want this to BE dysfunctional. Please continue.
nobody.yet 2008-04-24 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant writing! Some things were pretty hard to understand, but an interesting way to write a story! I liked it.
LostInLalaLand 2008-03-08 ch 3,	abuseThis has the same beautiful flow and style as the first chapter. It's cute and funny, but it seems incomplete. It doesn't have anything that makes you want to come back. There isn't really an established plot, which is fine when you're only at the beginning of the story, but if you don't do that soon, I think your story might go downhill a bit. Keep writing! LostInLalaLand
LostInLalaLand 2008-03-08 ch 1,	abuseThis is a good start to a story. It's a different approach to a traditional high school tale. It's not at all cliche, though. Good job, I really admire your writing abilities. There is definitely emotion in this piece, and the flow of your style really complements the high school life you're trying to portray. Again, good job. LostInLalaLand (with the Review Marathon)

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