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| she smolders 2008-09-09 ch 1, | abuseReading this makes me forget how to breathe because I've had moments like that too. This is a beautiful haiku. |
| fairytale failure 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseI love this one! It is simple and sweet. The title works with it, too. |
| Ygg 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseAah how this sounds familiar :-) Those are the times when they can really move your soul. Great work! |
| Basara 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abusea sweet moment where all around stops for a while... nice.. |
| painted.music 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa *sigh* I love your hiakus. You're so excellent with them. They seem to just come so naturally to you. Kudos, darling. Again and again and again. And whatever path you take, no matter how many versions of poetry you experiment with, please never stop writing hiakus as well. :) Zaijen -Shan- |
| Frog Tongue 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseI like the pick for the title. |
| siphoned afterglow 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseLove that feeling ;D |