BWAH HA HA! That's really funny I hope you continue!

Oh Wow! I can't wait for more, I hoep you update this.

I hope you continue this, it's really interesting! I'm a non-finisher writer. I can't finish anything. It sucks.

Oh my gosh, I love this story so far! Mic is adorable and hilarious. I have a friend that goes off on the same sort of extremely long tangents, and it's fantastic that Mic talks himself into believing them. I adore Hailey and Mic together, and I love how angry Val is. Please continue this story - it's wonderful!

I'm loving this story it has me falling out of my chair laughing, can't wait for the update

I am pleading with you, with every single fiber of my being, pleasepleasepleasepleasse update this story. Please.

I just love all your stories so much!! Most of the time my internet's too slow to open a review window properly, but I've just been going through everything you've got posted like crazy and I love every bit of it, seriously!

no i'm so sad! i wish there was more *Cries in corner* it was so much fun. *sob*

OH love it :)! Mic is crazy and Val seems really hot! update soon kay?

write more.

Oh, pretty pretty please write some more. I love it. I wanna have some more. I like your style of writing, and it reminds me of one of my best friends. This is the first story that made me laugh so loud. My father came in, wondering what the f... I was doing. If you don't write some more, I'll cry. You don't want me to cry, do you? WRITE SOMEH MOREH.

Cba to sign in, 'cause I'm still in school, but I thought it was ABOUT TIME I got onto reading your ** :). It's Doug.

"How the letters OMG and WTF apply to my life" - the title alone made me lol [mildly], which I take to be a sign of good things to follow.

Is this fiction slightly mirroring real life settings to begin with? Methinks so.

I know that me commenting on the way you've layed things out kind of spoils the humour, but let's just "pretend" (cough?) that I'm an old and boring man. Well, the gigantic paragraph near the beginning, I would've had issues with, except that it was structured that way to mirror the story he tells newbies so...I don't have an issue with it? I'm sure it's important to know that anyway.

You're writing in present tense! So much for prefering past tense. You tensist.

"Hailey and I both turn around, reeling in sheer disgust" xD. if nothing else, Duff does have an unfortunate surname.

(Also, just by the by, is it really necessary to have such an ENORMOUS disclaimer at the beginning and end? You pretty much put it in the summary already...)

Billie Joe...whom? Armstrong? Unless Joe was his surname o_o, in which case I've never heard of him before...Ah...Im guessing it was Armstrong now xD.

"The new kid is…disappointing." - I find casual ** more amusing than overt ** ^^.

Well Val isn't stereotypical at all...

"She stumbles back, giggling a little nervously." - I liked that a lot really, it's a very accurate representation of how someone'd really react in that situation...politely.

ok, Emo kid's over-reactions are actually quite funny xD.

LOTR references (Y).

That was an extremely absurdist ending, and a very good cliffhanger. If I didn't have to go home now, I'd carry on. I'll try and read more later...

That was so funny. Micah and Val are awesome.

The gender thing had me confused for awhile, probibly because of all the first persson and then the thing with Val saying 'she' thanks for clearing it all up thoguh.

I love how you ended this capter. This is hilarious!