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| the lobster mobster 2008-08-06 ch 3, | abuseThe gender thing had me confused for awhile, probibly because of all the first persson and then the thing with Val saying 'she' thanks for clearing it all up thoguh. |
| a wonderful mystery 2008-07-19 ch 3, | abuseI love how you ended this capter. This is hilarious! |
| Capricia 2008-07-01 ch 3, | abuseHilarious! I couldn't stop giggling, I can't wait to read more about Val and Mic. |
| Thread of Life 2008-06-21 ch 3, | abuseAw this is really cute! It confused me at first with the pronoun mixups, but then it made sense when it was revealed he thought he was a girl. Are you going to continue this eventually? It's pretty entertaining. |
| PencilSketchS 2008-06-06 ch 3, | abuseI absolutely love this story, for the characters and the humour and the fun. And Val the emo boy. And Micah, bless his soul. If you're still taking votes, though I feel bad about choosing, I'd just like to say I'd really like you to continue this story. But that does not mean that I don't want to hear more about Luke and Galen. Ah, I feel traitorous. But your humour is fantastic so please update this one soon. I would try to be more constructive, but what can I say, everything is put together well, and I laugh until I'm crying. I must have freaked out a few of my dorm neighbours by now too, when they walk past my room and hear me laughing. Ah, the joy of a good story. |
| Famirka 2008-06-05 ch 3, | abusehaha...that was so funny!!i can not stop laughing! |
| Bloodfeeder94 2008-05-26 ch 3, | abuseOMG!! thsi is hilarious! PLZ CONTINUE! |
| Azure.Hevn 2008-04-10 ch 3, | abuseOh, I see. Val thought he was a girl. That's why I was so confused with "she" terms in the last chapter. XD Ah, the melodrama. Mic is so spacey and he thinks the weirdest things, it's funny. |
| erasmuss 2008-04-08 ch 3, | abuseGod this story makes me crack up. I keep snorting at the stupid things they say and thalking outloud bit and the 'she's a boy' and Chavs DO wer stiped. Do Americans know what Chavs are? Do they have Chvs in America coz they only just 'got' them in Australa. Are you American? :S Good, funny work. I die to read more yeah. Lovelove Erasmuss |
| Domini-kun 2008-04-04 ch 3, | abuseOH. A guy. Whoops. My bad. Hehehe *sweatdrop* Sorry. My mistake. AWESOME!! MORE YAOI BOYXBOY RANDOMNESS!! Please update if you know what's good for you. *threatening background* |
| Domini-kun 2008-04-04 ch 2, | abuseIs Micah Dominic Heyer a girl or a guy? I'M CONFUSED!! It said Micah was a girl at one point, but then it's a yaoi! I HATE BEING CONFUSED! But I won't stop reading and reviewing. |
| Domini-kun 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseYou're emo? Cool. I got an emo friend. But since we go to a uniforme school (UNIFORMS SUCK!!) she can't wear her normal clothes. Well, she's not emo, but she's suicidal and emo-ISH. I said ISH. FRENCH ROCKS!! VIVE LE FRANÇAIS! Haha, the gun was the pimped version of the bow and arrow for love, right? Loser. Are you sure this is slash? The main character who's telling the story is someone I wish was my friend in real life *tear, then cries*! |
| Chicken Pride 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseI think... I prefer Broken Umbrella, lol. This one is kind of crazy. |
| Daydream Nation 2008-03-28 ch 3, | abuseThis is adorable and gay and funny and sexy and all things awesome. Especially that last scene. Priceless. Some pop culture references irk me though, but the amazing is enough to compensate. |
| Feel The Waltz 2008-03-22 ch 3, | abuseLOL, that was fantastic! I aboslutly adore how Mic keeps thinking aloud. :D Look forward to you nexr update! |