She really farted? o.O
Gross.
Anyway, I lobe this one... I love the names too! What do you do, look for them in a dictionary? I think a little bit f detail should help, but I'm not really sure if that would be good, but I'm not sure if it would work because of your perspective.
Are you even going to go on with this story? :S

Wew. This story is great. O.O continue?

The way things are told from the main character's perspective sure gives it a good start. I guess the way you've approached how people process their thoughts does make a difference, but what sets this down is the grammatic errors, sentence structure and some tense changing. I'd also recommend adding a bit more detail, especially in the description side of things - expand on things in a few more sentences sometimes instead of simply stating them with one. But, yeah you really do give character to the main character and a few others at least in the dialog and the first person side.

Great Chapter!

I LOVE Nicholas! And I love Henrietta too...when she's talking to Nicholas, cuz that's when she makes some damn clever remarks. I hate Nigel. I'm not gonna lie

I can't believe she farted... that was gross.

Love it!

The Himalayas and volcano thing is great, too; it's something my sister would do with me. Really funny and realistic.

I like this story so far. I wish that she will choose Nic over Nigel, eventually. pleasd update soon

Oh! I like the story!
I noticed you had two new stories- does that mean you're not going to update this one?

Hey, are you gonna update this story soon? I love it! It's so hilariously entertaining. You're a very talented writer who has a way with words and depicting your characters. Please post the next part soon. I keep coming back here hoping you'll have updated.

Nicholas is intriguingly hot. The fart moment was funny, especially Helena's txt. It'll be interesting to see how Nic's and Rietta's relationship progresses. He's too smart not to figure out her true intentions in befriending him. Keep up the awesome work!

Yeah!!Nic and Hell...ena.Woops almost said a curse word...NT ways...Wuts up?!Why have you not updated! This is pretty intresting so far!Rem(Moi)will be greatly disappointed if this does not go on!Plz continue!Cant wait for an updation!^^

yay!!
this story's great!!

Update quickly!

Helena is HILARIOUS! Lol, she may be a little 'slutty' as the female lead put it but she's still HILARIOUS! She's one of those people who are sarcastic and critical but you know they're good people and can't help loving them! LOl!

Nic is really intuitive! Honestly, I mean he knows how to speak Rietta's and Helena's way! Sweet. I like his personality ^_^ Nigel is definitely one of those guys that would be just a good friend not boyfriend, I agree with Helena there.

YOu're doing a great job witth your characters! I mean, they're flawed and some of them are really dislikeable but still sort of likable (Henrietta) and some of them should be dislikeable but you can't help but liking them (Helena) and some of them you just like right away from intuiation (Nicolas)

My favourite character is still Dini ^_^ and I'm a bit wreay of Nigel... hm...

But yeah Helena rocks! (did you get her name from 'The Midsummer Night's Dream?)

Great job! CAn't wait for more ^_^

Yeah the female lead is kind of shallow, it's hard for me to really relate to her which makes the story interesting to read but hard to connect too, but that;s just because I'm not good at relating with her type of person.

I LOVE DINI! She's really nice! And actually, she's quite thoughtful and she acts like me and my friends do (arguements and such and calling people misunderstood souls) I hope to see more of her if thats what you plan ^_^

As soon as Nicolas came up I instantly liked him! He's really distant but he's likable. You write him very well! I think he just wants a friend for once because maybe... his brother Nigel isn't as nice as everyone thinks. That's what I think. After all a real author doesn't let the readers stay on the first impressions of teh characters :)

I know you're definitely oging to let eveeryone in teh story mature quite a bit aren't you? Yay!

Great stuff!

Nice.Update soon.Liked ur story.and also cuz i have no life.So please update.