This is so beautifully written. I love the characters, they are really rich. I love how Isa and Rage are like ying and yang, opposites yet they fit together so perfectly. Well written. Absolutely gorgeous.

My apolgies if you thought I was judging your chracters but what they did, rather than what they thought. Let me assure you- I in no way throughout the story disputed Isa was clever, I guess I should've made my ironic statements more understandable to the general viewing public.

Forgive me for not thinking about Isa, and how he might not want a thick chain around his neck. I made the mistake any other reader would do and assumed the chain was of historical and economic value and Isa would not be in favour of bestowing it upon another person, however trustworthy they may seem. But I guess I was wrong.

Also the opinion that I expressed that I wasn't sure about Kennedy and his intentions...that also made me suspicious to whether Isa should hand over the chain to someone who later on, could possibly end up to be a backstabber. I can't pinpoint the EXACT reason that made me doubt Kennedy, but perhaps it was because I have a naturally suspicious mind, and I thought that a man helping a dragon with the risk of being running out of town might have a ulterior motive. It was only after I dispatched my other review, I realised that perhaps Kennedy was a nice guy after all.

I hope you don't think my review/s was a direct attack on the intelligence of your characters. It wasn't. I suppose it's my fault in a way, for not explaining thoroughly the reasoning behind my reviews^^

Now we've got that out of the way, I am now going to continue reading your story and enjoy your writing skills to the maximum. ^^

This story is adorable! And everything just flows. There are a few minor mistakes here and there (typos, misspellings, etc.)but that doesn't take away from the awesomeness of this. You don't delve into unnecessary such-and-such and to me you've managed a form of elegance through simplicity. Lovely. One thing I do wonder about though is the background on some of the characters, Rage in particular.

Isa is by far my favorite -- I can't help but favor the stoic, protective character.

Please continue updating this.

Hey! I haven't added u on story alert or favorites (yet! don't kill me, please!) but i'm reviewing A LOT! How good am I? *wink wink*

anywayz, why is kennedy so insistent that isa take's that sexy chain off?! I mean jeez, at least he could wait a day till they've settled in, and all that. And Isa? I had you down for a smart fellow! You could always cover that chain up with a tunic, or whatever dudes wore back in the day...

*sigh* i guess there's no prizes in guessing the character i like the least then. But why? This is weird. I'm sure K's a decent bloke. let's get past this!

dang it! so Isa DOES eat cooked food...well whenever he's not worried he's malnourishing his girlfriend that is...jeez, i must find a cookbook fast!!

BUT AWw...he's so devoted to her! normally dragon's take care of their "own needs" (get ur mind out da gutter!) but here he's proper like a subservent waiter. Isa, you are SO my ideal man! but i cant cook...so i guess i have to pretend to be starving all the tyme, lol.

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wHAT Amara said here caught my interest-

"You can't walk around with your hood down for forever, eventually you'll have to show your face, and when you do..."

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Well, erm, if u walk round with ur hood "DOWN" forever...wont his face already be on display? i mean, his face wont be "eventually" revealed, will it, cos it was never covered in the 1st place! (c my reasoning? lol)

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Gr8 story!

Hmm, dear old Kennedy...are his intentions noble? (or are they perverted like my media studies teacher, whom surprisingly has the same name...hmm)

My fav character. Ah...it has to be Isa, hasn't it? He's cool/saves sacrafices/flies a lot/doesn't eat (so u dont hav to cook for him)/isn't racist...what isn't there to like? My ideal man!

BTW- do dragons shed scales like snakes can?!? i mean, ok, so u haven't had "1sthand" experience with them, but maybe...just maybe, u mite know? (If u don't, then LIE. lol)

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I was wondering when the sacrafice bit was coming up! lol

Isa's name reminds me of science. don't ask. i have enuff nightmares as it is :)

wow, the chapters are shorter than what i'm normally used to, but hey, it's a good thing! means i wont skip anything at all!

Ooh...very nice! More more more!

(why do i sound like a demanding tot? *shivers*)

OMG this story is so well written! I love it so far! FAV! I hope you update soon! I really want to read more about Rage and Isa, they're so cute together! I was just wondering... how old does Isa look like as a human?

Please update asap!

8D Love stories like this. Please keep going!

hey, y have u stopped writing?
its so good.

:smack!: just keeps getting better =)

A dragon gets a bath =)

I love it! "An ass parading as a stallion"

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sweet