Wow, that was amazing. there is so much emotion in this song it makes me wonder if you had something like this go on in your life or if it just came to you. This song is really heart felt
I really like this poem but it's also confusing to me. You have an interesting way of putting words together and I like it. But when you read the first few lines for example I'm not really sure what your talking about. For the most part though it's a cool poem.