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| Ashelin 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseEven though this was a little depressing (I guess life really is in general) the flow and just emotion in this was wonderful. I could totally see this being a song. Which is very cool. Man, I review almost as bad as I write these days. Anyway, great job! |
| IdeasInTheAir 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseThat's really good. I'd love to hear the melody that goes along with it. Well done! Smiles ~Danielle=) |
| a silenced revolution 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuse"I never intended to turn into me." That's what this reminded me of. Amazing. Looking forward to the next one. |