Even though this was a little depressing (I guess life really is in general) the flow and just emotion in this was wonderful. I could totally see this being a song. Which is very cool. Man, I review almost as bad as I write these days. Anyway, great job!

That's really good. I'd love to hear the melody that goes along with it. Well done!
Smiles
~Danielle=)

"I never intended to turn into me."

That's what this reminded me of. Amazing. Looking forward to the next one.