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| CallaLilly 2008-10-01 ch 25, | abuseamazing amazing story, I loved it, such drama. anyway, gotta run, but I loved it! |
| aurora borealis 2008-09-16 ch 25, | abuseWhat a beautiful story. I absolutely loved it. And Erin was so heartbreakingly beautful when she broke up with him. Man. This story was so worth reading in one sitting - even if my study group will kill me tomorrow for not reading what I was supposed to. Ah, well. Great work. I loved it. |
| Bedlam Chaos 2008-08-05 ch 25, | abuseThis story is cute. Really. Even if I feel a bit bad for Erin. But Ethan is really a cool guy :) the perfect gay friend :) |
| katieee 2008-08-03 ch 25, | abuseI absolutely LOVe this story. So much. Im going to show it to EVERYONE. I have to see half of the movies in this and read it again. And i really, really really want to either write a movie, or a song right now. But I hvae to pee and go to bed. So Im going to go to sleep and dream of ever having a love like this, or writing something amazing as this. But my urge to pee is so bad, i'll leave a better review later. :) tomorrow too amazing |
| bemused scribbler 2008-08-03 ch 11, | abuseholy crap, this chapter made me laugh so hard. guyliner and gay j!! lol, amazing |
| McShortShort 2008-08-03 ch 2, | abusei kinda think jordan thinks that ethan is gay or maybe she's usually that comfortable with people?? |
| northernmoon 2008-07-29 ch 25, | abusegreat feel good story with enough good music and movies moments to make it not too cheesy. Great characters & good insight into twin-age. |
| amare y agape 2008-07-27 ch 1, | abuseOMG I loved it SO MUCH! hehe that's it. |
| N.M.E 2008-07-26 ch 25, | abuseAw...this story was so cute! It was so nice. Jordan and Erin are so good. I liked it a lot! |
| The Crazy 2008-07-18 ch 26, | abusei read this entire story in one sitting and i have to say it rocked my socks off. |
| Alora The Sleepy 2008-07-13 ch 26, | abuseAww. LOVED IT. Seriously. It was brilliant. This is my newest favourite story. And the best part? I actually have no criticisms other than movie titles should be in italics. Seriously. I found nothing else wrong with it. And you even almost made me cry when Erin broke up with Ethan. Of course, that may have had to do with the fact that I was listening to 'Red Light Pledge' by Silverstein while I read it. I dunno if you've heard it, or if there's any other version that the acoustic version, but the one I have is off 'Punk Goes Acoustic 2', so it kind of made it all the more sad. Coz he sings it all kind of emotionally with the pretty guitars in the background and talking about some massive mistake he made and asking her to wait for him and crap. So, yeah. Moral of the story is, you almost made me cry. :D Anyway, it's 11.51pm right now, so I'm thinking I should go to bed. :) But I just wanted to say great story. Well done, dude. |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-07-09 ch 26, | abuseI loved how everything worked out and the plot of you entire story. Awesome job, I adored your story :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuseI really like Ethan, he sounds so sweet and caring. The way you make him tell the story makes him seem really real too. I can't wait to find out what happens next :] |
| Wind's Whisper 2008-07-09 ch 26, | abuseI just wanted to say that this is the third time that I've read this story, and I love it. And I'm sorry it took me so long to pull my finger out and leave a review! Do you know, while reading this story, I had "Worn Me Down" by Rachael Yamagata stuck in my head. I think it captures Erin and Ethan's relationship perfectly! x |
| this requires pants 2008-07-07 ch 26, | abuseThat was, by far, the cutest story I have ever read on this site. Beautiful, beautiful job and for once, I have no complaints. |