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princessbig232
2008-08-14
ch 9,
abuseI love it :)

I read the whole thing this afternoon. I could not rise from my seat until I finished LOL

Good job

x
writteninink
2008-07-22
ch 11, anon.
abuselol that was really cute. haha
righthere431
2008-07-20
ch 11,
abuseaw so cute!
righthere431
2008-07-20
ch 9,
abuseah olive juice =] lol love that from family guy =]
righthere431
2008-07-20
ch 8,
abuseahaha her mom took it out of her college moneyu =] so funny
righthere431
2008-07-20
ch 7,
abuseah amber is so lyingg!
righthere431
2008-07-20
ch 6,
abuseaw the target thing was cute =] lol
righthere431
2008-07-20
ch 5,
abusewhat? he died? =/ arghh its so complicated lol
righthere431
2008-07-20
ch 4,
abuseaw does matt rally not lover her anymore? =/ then why did he give her all those flowers?
righthere431
2008-07-20
ch 2,
abusetks tsk hate comes to love sometimes danielle =]
righthere431
2008-07-20
ch 1,
abuseohoho does danielle and matt have a past? =]
Ngoc1231
2008-07-20
ch 11,
abuseI am glad that I was lazy and didn't get around to deleting the alert for this haha. This was cute!

And well, that is a lot of stuff that had happened. I am sorry

And I actually sat here and mouthed olive juice to see if it would look like i love you haha.
~*~Ngoc1231~*~
kcn
2008-07-20
ch 11,
abuseCute story! I do wonder though, where waws the teacher in the study hall class? Just a thought... usually teachers stop the public displays of affection... Anyway, I enjoyed the story!
kcn
2008-07-20
ch 6,
abuseOkay, so I'm not done yet, but this caught my attention...
'Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia'
That is seriously my favorite word, and it makes me happy that someone else actually knows it!
Funny, the fear of long words...
It's about as mean as the word lisp... only worse...
8D
I have more reading to do, so I will finish this review later!
faithful.dream
2008-07-16
ch 9,
abuseaww so cute !
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